Part Two – CYA Conference Notes
Following on from last week’s post about the three-day CYA Event recently in Brisbane…
The actual CYA Conference started with a buzz! Competitions winners were announced and I was thrilled (and even relieved) to find that my trio of rhyming PB manuscripts won the published author competition, judged by Luna Soo (Hardie Grant) and Alyson O’Brien (Little Hare). A CYA win is a massive injection of confidence and affirmation, and I was so thrilled! It was wonderful to later have time one-on-two with Luna and Alyson, discussing my work, and hearing their thoughts/feedback. (They are both so lovely!) Thank-you to Alyson and Luna for their belief in my work, and to the whole tribe of CYA organisers and volunteer judges who bring this competition to fruition!
From there I went to my first editorial one-on-one, which was insightful, but also discouraging. It was a story I heard from a number of publishers throughout the conference – and have heard often before – about a reluctance to publish in rhyme. Rhyme is lost in translation – so it’s hard to ‘sell’ to Sales & Marketing. But kids (and parents!) love rhyme! And there are a lot of English-speaking countries in our world! And having written rhymed and unrhymed picture books, I know the time and tenacity taken to get rhyme right! I loooong for a Sales & Marketing department who will love (and value!) rhyming PBs like I do.
Then onto the sessions of the day – when I wasn’t popping out for one-on-one editorial interviews…
Dee White – Pitch Perfect
I have had the benefit of Dee’s attention to details in pitching. She knows her stuff – and nails it!
Elements of an Effective Pitch:
- Hooks the reader
- Connects the reader with MC
- Hints at what’s to come
- Sets context – genre/readership
- Shows where it might sit in a bookshop / comparative titles
Do’s and Don’ts
- Don’t introduce too many characters.
- Hint at story arc.
- Don’t try to tell the whole story – MC, story problem & why it’s getting worse.
- Include themes.
- Clear & coherent
- Why it’s unique and appealing to readers
- Establish personal connection – why you and why now?
- Be proud/passionate
- Be prepared for questions
- Practise your pitch
- Be prepared to take on feedback
- Try not to read too much if asked to read a sample. (Start at the start – and edit the text so that it is punchier than the actual start to the novel.)
Belle Brooks – Self-Publishing
This was the most enabling presentation I have seen about self-publishing. I took pages of notes, and started to see how it could be a viable option for me and a number of manuscripts I believe in, if I run out of options (or heart) with traditional publishers. Much of my notes would only make sense in context, but here are some takeaways…
• You must have a professional editor, who hears your voice and doesn’t try to change it – but helps you bring the story out.
• Don’t fluff your book with ‘content’.
• Know your strengths. Accept your faults.
• Not everyone loves your stuff. And that’s ok. Everyone judges.
• There’s a market for every book.
• Own your voice. Own your style. You are YOU.
• When you get bigger, Amazon works harder for you – because you make them money.
• Always work on your backmatter … Leading them where they need to go. Constantly leading them to your best work.
• Three stars is a good review.
Belle’s tips on blurbs:
- A blurb is critical to success – You can change your blurb on platforms.
- Appeal to your reader – not yourself. (Belle writes the blurb before she writes the books – which means there is no temptation to include too much detail.)
Isobel Carmody – Writing YA
Isobel spoke freely, with no notes. Some of the gems gleaned:
To write is to be. We are a tapestry of everything we’ve ever written.
- Or job is not to be constrained, but to stretch out beyond the edges.
- What do you want to give the world? Nothing.
- How do I write like a child? The child in me it’s still there. Same for YA.
- A relief to let go of the adult world.
- Write to your deep-seated questions.
- Write about the ideas that are in you!
- In children’s books, children grow – but they don’t grow up! (Margaret Wild)
- The choices we make as children/young adults inform the choices we make as adults.
- Writing is an attempt to believe that humans can get better.
- Issues books – Approach your craft/subject with a humility. Don’t use it to push an issue.
- Write your first draft. Then look for themes/issues.
- Write inwardly. Write the book. Worry about where it lands afterwards.
- If the story’s not working for you, don’t push through. Step away. Give your mind the fallow times.
- Editing is an essential part of the creative process. Dig down into it for themes, nuance, etc… Create the sense of reality.
- If you’ve written deeply from yourself, you will not get bored during editing.
- Go deep. Into yourself. Into the moment. In your writing.
- A great book will make it through.
CYA Closing Panel
General Takeaways:
- Market down 2.6% but children’s writing up 1.2%.
- Middle grade has been booming for 4-5yrs. Is doing really well.
- YA is down. Publishers trying to bring YA down to your middle grade.
Alex Adsett (Agent):
- It’s not an easy industry for author/illustrators. It’s not an easy industry for agents/editors either.
- Always write what’s in your heart. Let us worry about how to fit it into the market.
Debbie Lee (Ingram – Sparks)
- Wherever you’re at, work with professionals.
- You are a business.
Davina Bell (Affirm Press)
- Looking for more junior fiction.
- Trends: girl power / child activism/climate change / diversity
Mary Verney – Sydney office. (Penguin Random House)
- Lots of buyers are asking for good non fiction for kids.
Lucy Bell (Pantera Press)
- Has mostly acquired from the slush pile.
- Looking for activism/climate change. Haven’t published many PBs, but possibilities with non fiction/activism books.
Indie is often a stepping stone. It’s not an us and them. We’re part of the same conduit and can coexist.
Thank-you to the Bundaberg RADF committee that made attendance at all these conference events possible. There is still one day of notes to catch you up on – from the Everything is a Genre day of conference. Tomorrow (Saturday) from 10-11am I will be feeding-back in person at the Bundaberg Library. You can register here.
Margaret is collecting Poetry Friday links a Reflections on the Teche – with a teaspoon and a bit of string.
Kat, first–CONGRATULATIONS! I’m thrilled to see you recognized for your work and look forward to see you publish more and more. Hooray! And, this week’s post is so rich. I love the advice. In a way, it’s very comforting…all the advice to “be you.” You give me hope and inspiration. Enjoy this moment of joy! So happy for you and the words.
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Thank-you, lovely Linda. I’m hoping the win is some sort of impetus to get more PBs rolling – but we shall wait and see! I’ve always been passionate about poetry – but the CYA weekend seems to have honed that passion and given greater direction for my writing – and confidence to push harder!
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Your post is very encouraging yet realistic. The children’s writing world is challenging yet so inspiring. I’m happy you are getting your voice out there.
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So glad you found the post encouraging, Margaret. Challenging and inspiring is right!
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Congratulations for your honor, Kat, & good, good luck in the future for those manuscripts! This, like last week’s, is so fabulous & helpful. Thanks for sharing so much with us.
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Thank-you, Linda! I am for sure going to be tenaciously hunting down a home for them – and hope that during moments of discouragement, I remember the boost of hope that the CYA weekend gave. I’m glad you found the conference notes helpful.
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Congratulations on your honor! The conference sounds amazing. Thank you for sharing the wisdom you gleaned Good luck pursuing those manuscripts and more!
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Thank-you so much, Kay. It was a rich learning experience. Now more firmly cemented after the opportunity to share back in my local area. I can’t wait for wide open spaces to write! (Has been very busy since the conference – hence the delayed sharing of notes.)
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Good stuff! Thanks for sharing your takeaways, Kat, and CONGRATULATIONS on your award! WOOT!!!
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Thanks, Michelle. Now to work on trying to turn it into a picture book or few. (No guarantees about that!)
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Congratulations, Kat! Couldn’t happen to a better smiler/more deserving writer!
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Well, that comment sure brings a smile! Thanks, Tabatha.
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Congratulations Kat! And thank you for sharing this information with us.
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It’s been good discipline for me, too, to gather the notes into an organised format. Last lot on the blog today!
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Sounds like an amazing conference! Congratulations on your award! Thank you for sharing some of the nuggets you learned with us, and I hope to one day find that smae marketing department you speak of 🙂
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The hunt is on! 🙂
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Congratulations on your award and recognition Kat! And I think your rhyming picture books will find a home! Thanks for sharing all this rich info from your conference, sounds like it was fantastic!
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Thanks, Michelle. I hang onto that hope – though at times it feels like it’s a very fine strand.
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Congratulations! And thanks for sharing all the writing tips!
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Thanks. Last tips up today. 🙂
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Yippee! Yay! Yahoo! Congratulations and thanks for sharing the wealth with your take-aways. Here’s my found poem from your notes about Isobel Carmody’s words:
deep seated questions
give your mind the fallow times
go deep…make it through
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I’m not at all surprised you found a poem in Isobel’s notes – rereading them was like sifting through jewels. Loved your joyous response to my news. Made me smile! 🙂
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It’s really cool to hear such a thorough report from a far-off English-speaking culture, and congratulations on your injection of affirmation! May your rhyming work get the next recognition!
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Thanks, Heidi. I’m going to be very methodical, strategic and committed to the submissions process anew. Hoping the win will help them standout in the slush pile!
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Kat, your post is so rich in details that I thank you for all of the advice. Congratulations on being honored for your work. What a proud moment it was for you to receive such an honor. Love this line: “Writing is an attempt to believe that humans can get better.”
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That was a great quote, Carol. So much truth in Isobel’s words. Glad you enjoyed the post.
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